Reviews for SecretEpisode: Naruto

[Raztec]

Too simplistic

You had a good idea, but it was let down by your presentation as a whole.

For a start, pictures do not count as good flash work, what about your own drawings or ideas? There is no real picture that stands out and it is a shame movement in done in blocks and not on actual people you could have tried to make.

The sound is very poor, voice acting is sometimes an issue I know but the speed of the voice was a bit much sometimes and made me lose intrest, speaking of which Naruto is not something all people will know about and so this is limited into its viewers perspective.

It did make me laugh twice, you did have a lot to say and yet it is a shame you did not support your idea with more hard work, overall this needs a lot of work and should not be on newgrounds.

SlashFirestorm responds:

THREE THINGS

1. I thought about making the voice a lot faster, but then a lot of the speech became hard to understand and I didn't feel like making subtitles.

2. No microphone, no wacom, and my mouse is a shitty ball-mouse that I have to jerk across the desk to move the cursor. Drawing my own graphics is impossible at the moment. Hopefully that will change one day; I plan on making a flash for Clock Day and I'll need my own drawing and voice for it.

3. lol, I'm not trying to make it "traditionally" good. The secret episode is a long-standing tradition of the Barney Bunch, and it relies more on humor than graphics and sound. Plus, since a secret episode can be made in a relatively short period of time (even one as movement-heavy as this one was made in a single night) and requires only basic AS knowledge and tweens, one can easily create lulz for the entire Portal! :-D

[tdino89]

its okay

it was getting annoying of naruto's voice. so i would try not to have that in any of your other movies because that will just make people stop watching it. well i hope you come up thing something alittle better next

SlashFirestorm responds:

If Naruto's voice annoyed you, I captured the anime's spirit PERFECTLY.

My next secret episode will probably be about Bleach, although I've got a long list of other ideas, ranging from anime to Nicktoons to swell messages from Drew Pickles himself. ;-)

[firemaidenseven]

The safeword is firemaidenseven..

Gotta give you a six for the laugh and roast.

SlashFirestorm responds:

The actionscript for the alias detection is pretty simple. I think I'll be excessively abusing it for a while now. ;-)