weird background
weird audio
funny little animation though, good!
Reviews for "At the pizza reasturant"
Zany
Wacky, off the wall, call it whatever, but I could recall a very early Matt Wilson movie which had the same plotless animation constructed simply to show his skills as an aspiring Flash artist. Keep up the work, make a storyline beyond simply eating, tune the audio up, and you'll be on your way.
Voice acting and Animation
Well, you have managed to animate pretty good but It's hard to tell what the animations have to do with the story line. Also it's hard to tell the different characters apart from each other because they all sound the same, you could at least try to sound like different persons. The sound effects are nice, but what you could add is some background, plain white gets boring. But otherwise pretty nice, I bet you have potential of doing a much better flash movie.
Not good voice acting
But i worked in a pizza place for 3 years and some customers were like that ...bitching cus their pizza wasnt out in 10 minutes. I think a 5 and 3 was pretty generous.
What was that?
I think the problem with this animation is clear: that it, itself, is not clear. I can tell there was a story that you were trying to tell, but I didn't understand what it was. Part of that was due to the graphics; they're awful. The people barely look like people, there's no background, and barely any props. The other problem is the voice acting. There's potential there, but not enough of that was shown here for me to believe it wasn't the same person doing all the character's voices. Even if there was, some of the things they were saying didn't come through clearly, so that also added to the problem. My advice to you is simple: amp up the quality of EVERYTHING for your next submission.