Very good! I like the variety of the highlights in the song particularly. I wanted more from the lyrics...they just kind of looped a lot. Despite that, I still got a lot out of the song.
8 / 10
-0.5pts = Standard "nothing's perfect" deduction.
-1pt = No good lyric progression or variety.
-0.5pts = Song kind of looses energy as it plays. Could've been shorter, honestly.
Seriously. Good. Work. Thanks for sharing.