great
its excellent for a first part made me want more i hope you finish it unlike most people on newgrounds that start a series they never finish i hope you can
Reviews for "MegaMan Zero 'Unleashed'"
Good
that was really good,im looking forward to the sequel
Better!
Enough for me to bump it up two more stars, Lol. But your not getting 10 because of the overall improvment, your getting a 9 because of the overall quality. While changing the beginning did at least strengthen the mood a bit, your choice of words was still poorly done, Lol. However, I really did feel some connection between Zero, even more so with Ciel now that you've got that little romance gig in there when he woke up. But you may have been able to do better instead by adding that he heard her voice, since you made her yell zero a few times. The presentation of the story was also stronger with these two changes, but you could really do better, Lol. The Animation is in no way, in need of improvment. It's awesome enough as it is. =D
The dialogue however is the only thing you really need to work on, but if you cant speak english well, try finding someone else to type the story for you. Just be careful that he's skilled at it, Lol.
YK-Blaze responds:
thanks for your very helpful reviews dude! It made me improve, which make you a real reviewer..
eeeeeehhhh
its pretty good.
nice move on the space thing...took me a bit to get it. :P
looks promising
this could be an interesting series!