Nice
"Awwww, right in the feel bads" lok
Brilliant dude great job. 8/10 3/5
Suggestions:
A little longer
_DarkRavenZ_
Reviews for "No Frame By Frame"
fluffkomix responds:
i am planning on making a longer flash with my friends, but thats not gonna be for a while.
to be honest, the "right in the feel bads" line was not scripted. i told joe to voice it however he wanted and that's how he did it.
the original line was "ouch"
Meh
This is just above average. You need a little more background detail and the voice acting needed a bit more feeling. It sounded unrehearsed and most of it was too slow.
Work on your sound too, that plays a big part in how high of a rating you get.
fluffkomix responds:
joe has more feeling in his voice acting, but speaks too close to the mic.
i have less feeling, but have a controllable, distinct and clear voice.
we even ourselves out.
Quite well done!
The animation for the first half of the animation was iffy, but that's forgivable considering you only got your tablet while animating the second half. And the second half of the movie was very well animated. (Even in the first half, the lip sync was spot on)
It was a short flash, and it delivered swift and efficiently. The only suggestion I can make is to have them blink occasionally, like for emphasis.
For the sound, I'd recommend Audacity (free software) to remove the noise in the background.
Overall, great flash! (Also wow, Joe making an FBF animation as a response to this. XD)
fluffkomix responds:
i don't really like having them blink unless its a drastic change of eyes or something cartoony like that. i do have audacity, but i dont think anything could remove my grandma's dishwashing. i could've removed the fuzz, but i got a little too lazy.
thanks for the review! and joe is sorta spiteful like that. his is with the song vampire weekend by a-punk.
or is it a-punk by vampire weekend...
i can never be too sure....
Brilliant
The spontaneous combustion was my favorite part.
Art was decent, syncing was great, and it made a great point about some of these "random" flashes that clutter up the place.
Also aren't tablets amazing? :) I got mine half a year ago with part of an extra paycheck. Best investment ever I'd say.
fluffkomix responds:
my fav part, too.
im trying to bone up on my art, i still think i can improve on my syncing, and i hate those flashes most of the time.
and yes, i absolutely wuv my tablet.
and fun fact: just to spite me in the making of this flash, my friend joe who appeared in this one is currently making a FBF animation right now!
FINALLY!
WELL LYP SYNCED ANIMATION! dear GOD! its hard to come by that these days! very entertaining. althoug lacking in a bit more movement. although maybe that was just ironic... or irony is an alternative method of not admitting your lazy LOL.
well. either way.. i am a lazy fat git with nowt better to do and i rate it 10 and 5. well done :D:D:D
fluffkomix responds:
im a lazy fat git with nothing better to do then high five you for giving me a ten.
(high five!)