Reviews for Racism!

[Cha0tic221]

Okay... yeah, racism's bad...

I'm not voting it down because I don't like the topic of racism, I'm voting it down because of the lack of artistic influence.

Sure the graphics were simple and animated well enough, but the overall flow of the film was pretty bad. It looks like the guy is sliding across the ground as he's walking. Also, the shadow on his front side for each step doesn't fit.

And probably the most overall thing was that it was short. All you really did was explore one aspect of racism, there are many different angles you could go off of. Don't limit your abilities there. If you're working on something, work on it hard and don't limit yourself.

Slay-Meek responds:

Thank you for the criticism, I'll definitely consider it in my next work.

As far as the length though, we were actually supposed to aim for 30 seconds for the assignment, but 60 seconds was as short as I was able to make it. I'll admit though that stopping racism wasn't my primary focus, it was more of a requirement that the flash have a message behind it.

I hope you'll look forward to my future work though, our next project gives us twice as much time to work on it, and full creative power.

[RatherRandomReality]

4 weeks

Not bad, but it took you 4 weeks??? You are either very lazy or you are lying. More like 4 days of work at most. Anyways, the flash was good though, don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it. Good luck form now on.

[justanotherdave]

Front page?

This is a nice bit of animation but I really wouldn't say it was front page or 4/5 material. Nice work but I think people are getting a little too 10/10 5/5 happy!
Hope you got good marks in your assignment

[Juvygenius]

A Slight Improvement

People will definately get the message, but i think this would have been better without the thought bubbles. This is just one of those things where people need to understand by themselves, so in other words there is no point in not giving them a face if ur going to point out there expressions.

[nepyneps]

woops

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