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Reviews for "Racism!"
Slay-Meek responds:
thanks
perfect, very good
Even a pro couldn´t make it better. Good job.
Slay-Meek responds:
thank you!
Very Nice
It had a good vibe round the whole thing and it was simple yet effective. Maybe i would have made the title a bit more subtle. Apart from that fantastic!
Slay-Meek responds:
xD I couldn't come up with a good title. thanks
nice
this is a perfect PSA against racism becuase you didn't use a color that many people today use to represent theirs, and others race.
and the animation was nice and smooth as well.
but...
you should have used an ANGRY FAIC instead of those you drew
Slay-Meek responds:
hah, thanks :]
Okay... yeah, racism's bad...
I'm not voting it down because I don't like the topic of racism, I'm voting it down because of the lack of artistic influence.
Sure the graphics were simple and animated well enough, but the overall flow of the film was pretty bad. It looks like the guy is sliding across the ground as he's walking. Also, the shadow on his front side for each step doesn't fit.
And probably the most overall thing was that it was short. All you really did was explore one aspect of racism, there are many different angles you could go off of. Don't limit your abilities there. If you're working on something, work on it hard and don't limit yourself.
Slay-Meek responds:
Thank you for the criticism, I'll definitely consider it in my next work.
As far as the length though, we were actually supposed to aim for 30 seconds for the assignment, but 60 seconds was as short as I was able to make it. I'll admit though that stopping racism wasn't my primary focus, it was more of a requirement that the flash have a message behind it.
I hope you'll look forward to my future work though, our next project gives us twice as much time to work on it, and full creative power.