Not bad
I must say, great work, it made me giggle. Your visuals could have a liiiiiitle more more on them, but over all, nice job!
Not bad
I must say, great work, it made me giggle. Your visuals could have a liiiiiitle more more on them, but over all, nice job!
Better animation quality.
This flash had potential but has so much room for improvement.
1. Voice acting can be improved.
2. Animation quality can take this a long way.
That's all I have to say.
Not too bad
Well, I expected more ...
A good try.
You did well , but you could have better visuals (no offence!).
Entertaining
It was pretty entertaining. The jokes were pretty good and the audio was decent but the visuals could have easily been improved. This was an entertaining video but with some tweaking to the visuals and even the audio and you would have had one amazing video. Other than that, it was still a solid, entertaining effort. Good job.