Very good, but one thing.
There was one spot where it sounded like your sound was off. When Red-eyes fired his gun, the sound for it (I think it was anyway) happened about a second beforehand. Was this the sound for that gun or one offscreen? Just wondering.
Amazing though. This is a fine piece of work.
yeah, it is off, i dont know how to properly sync audio with the animation, i just basically dropped in imported audio files into flash and used separate layers for them. when i play it just on my computer all the timings are in sync, but i guess the browser players lags a bit and makes the sound off, especially on that part cos of all the effects going on in those frames.
Thanks! ^^
Nice First Submission
Very Good work on your first submission, keep up the good work and you should become very popular here.
My only suggestions is try and use more animation next time instead of the still frame style, although it is nice. After a few minutes into a movie they can get stale and boring, but still a good idea.
thanks! i'll keep that in mind.
Pretty Cool.
Nice work. I like the the mysterious dark figure look. Its unique and adds alot of drama to the picture. Great job. Hope to see more of your work.
nice.
Was the message in the background at the end supposed to be:
//tech: calc. . /;define::pandora || [hack]* cap: syntax[] cam0. err0r .** . 1390.206. : :
?
just wondering.
oh. hehe. just some jibberish actually, put together to make it look "sci-fi/futuristic". i had to put it there, i thought, since the ending loop seemed bland without it; motion graphics-wise.
A. MAZE. ING
Your art and animation was beautiful. Sound was a tad bit off,noticabley with the sniper rifle shot. The transparency on the 3 rifleman was to noticable as you could see the outlines of the one behind them. Otherwise, this looked like a opening scen to a modern video game. Only advice I can give is follow through with this story.