A. MAZE. ING
Your art and animation was beautiful. Sound was a tad bit off,noticabley with the sniper rifle shot. The transparency on the 3 rifleman was to noticable as you could see the outlines of the one behind them. Otherwise, this looked like a opening scen to a modern video game. Only advice I can give is follow through with this story.
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ok Woudl a small bit off background story be too much to ask. cos i seriously had no idea hat it was about. Major Tweens and Obvious Rip Off and Cut Outs. th eonly good thign was the sound and ....oh look its not even composed by you..
im sorry this was so horrible, but maybe if you read the Author Comments you would have a tiny bit of idea why this flash is like this.
first off, there really is no story to this. that's why i said in the "Author Comments": "a teaser trailer maybe?"
because, like i said in the "Author Comments", this is just a project for Multimedia Class. This is to show off skills that was learned through out the term; in other words, it is execution rather than story telling.
Rip Off and Cut Outs? Excuse me? maybe iIf you read the "Author Comments", i also said there, that all graphics were made in photoshop. It insults me that you accuse me of ripping off and cutting out images. I made those images myself (with a few help of downloaded brushes for the background) but all figures in there was made by me, and me alone.
I'm sorry to lash out like that, but your review is nothing more than an attack; not a speck of proper criticism at all and i have to defend myself from your colossal ignorance.
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the animation in nice and it look cool but it wus kinde boring but other wyes good job
nice...
yea def killzone cut-outs i saw, and i think i saw some tweens. animation was good, seein as how youve only been animating for a few weeks. i gave an 8 cause im a big fan of killzone and the animation was pretty good, hope to see the final result.
i wouldn't say killzone cutouts. I made that figure straight in photoshop with the brush with no reference at all. Not that im saying it was not killzone inspired. because it definitely is.
but anyway, i just had to explain that. Thanks for the feedback.
This flash...
The animator was so lazy it wasn't even funny,he drew some killzone rip-off figures and used some tweens.Some of the scenes were so bad it was shameful for instance that scene with the 3 guys shooting...Where was the animation in that just them seizuring around with an un-matching sound effect that timed-out to early.The only reason this isn't a zero is becuase of the music.
okay. thanks?
please dont say im lazy for I have put much time and effort into this. Yes, they were killzone "INSPIRED" rather than ripoffs. Can one not have that same damn design of a headgear for his characters? and the only resemblance to killzone are those glowing eyes. give me a break.
and the sound not synched to the movie? try viewing it with a more beefy computer...