Good job.
Sorry it took me so long to get to this.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
The animation style that you have is pretty good. It's original most of the time, but there are a few places where it gets just a little sloppy. It kind of adds to the comical feeling that you get from the submission though. Not the best animation or graphics, but clearly not bad at all.
~ Story/Content ~
Actually not as funny or as random as the first one that I watched. It really didn't include too much more of a story, but it was still pretty fun to watch. Still pretty random in all aspects too.
The over 9,000 joke was really lame and I knew it was coming. Very predictable.
This one seemed to have a lot of action in it. I can tell that you really put a lot of hard work into your submission and I do put effort into the rating that I give to people.
~ Audio ~
I really do think that a lot of the voices could be better quality. The Moose voice especially. To me it's sort of hard to understand and sounds kind of staticy. I don't know if it's the microphone or if your too close to the mic, etc.. Whatever it is I think it's really the only thing that would have to be worked on in this submission at all to make it better.
~ Overall ~
An interesting story. Keep me updated whenever you have a new submission because I enjoy your humor.
~ Review Request Club ~