Awesome game!
It's a pretty good for a first game:
Bad things:
1)Cursor is shitty
2)Ground is a little bugged
3)In some parts the drawings weren't good
4)Clouds are fucked up
Good things:
1)Amazing drawings
2)Good controls
3)Nice story
4)Good coding
5)Smooth cursor
6)Smooth vCam
7)Awesome for a first game
Good job, you did well, I like this.