im guessing it's just short
guessing it's short or im not doing something right. but very nice flash music was proper and liked how the guy got really happy when you started to walk :D
Reviews for "My first Flash game :D"
I actually found it fun!
Now, I'm afraid I went into this game rather skeptical. "Oh, god, another pathetic arrow keys + space bar stickman jumping game". But it was actually very, very good for a first attempt.
The level design was intuitive and good fun, the little hints were well-made and useful, and the art, although basic, was very good, complimenting the rather basic nature of the game. However, I would recommend a couple of things: First, make the music loop. I actually really enjoyed it, but when it stopped and was nowhere to be found, it made the game a fair bit more boring.
Second, make it longer. You've done all the hard parts! Just stretch it out a little longer, add a basic plot, perhaps a tutorial level for a new feature. Also, I'd recommend making the plant climbing a little easier. When I wasn't getting stuck on the roof of the leaf above, I was plummeting to the start again, and (spoilers) add having to keep my mouse on the plant and it became quite frustrating.
Lastly, for God's sake, give it a better title! :D.
Honestly, you're ALMOST there, I could easily see an upgraded version of this, with a story and all, on the frontpage. Good luck!
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Hmmm...its ok, but no things to do. And if its your first game why you put it to Newgrounds?
Vakoto responds:
Hmmm good question, I guess I had to start out somewhere right?
sweet
awesome for a first game :D
I guess it was ok...
You should add more things to do, maybe some puzzles, or action things. Other then that it was ok for first game, but it would have been nice if you added some more things to do.
Vakoto responds:
Whatever, if I get an A on this project in my class I'll be happy, and then I can focus on actually making a good game. Besides, I did a lot more than most in the short timespan we had haha! :P