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Reviews for "Girlchan in Paradise Ep1"

W....T.....F?

Woohoo! KINGDOOM RULES!!!!! Awesome but totally random cartoon dude! I loved when you said all the names and went like Hari...oku.....carmasama......I don't know if that was a name but still hepas funny!

DEAR GOD I LOL'D HARD

THAT was amazing. It's like a conglomeration of all things crap/generic anime put into a deliciously demented cliche form.

Proceed with MOAR!!!

epic

I couldn't stop laughing the voice acting and story line twists were epic.

Humor but....

It is shown you tried to be too funny in most scenes..... And when you cross the line of funny and trying to be too funny. Alot of jokes just seem tiredly annoying.

Sure most animes these days go like this. Too much blabbering , less action.... Thats why I enjoy only a few animes and these are mostly based of games and such. Atleast there you can expect most plot twists.

Anyway: You forgot 2 more jokes of typical anime.
Main Charater (mostly a guy) with worst table manners EVER! And eats alot since hes the main charater and a pig.
Some random made up animal or charater that is suppose to be the cutest of them all and gets most popularity or dolls made out of em.
And since you are also paroding dubs. Try to get people's lines cut off or going while the other person starts talking so they miss their lines (or bad censoring of 4kids.)

Good points:
The introduction, The sponsoring, The bad lip syncing, The overused same pose of a charater's face (though you overused it a little.) The less action.

Bad points:
The overdone on purposely bad voice acting. The fact of only a few charaters not even being used much. The too long unannouncable names... (too overrated really). The fact that you missed some points.

I can't give more then a 8 since I gave a small chuckle but after a while the humor just crashes and burns.... it toke way too long.

Try to let the jokes flow then trying to force the jokes in.

AHH my brain!

Funny as hell, but I wish you had lip sniced unlike how all japanese shows don't. Also this seems to be the plot line for all animes only this is so much funnier. Nice work guys.

Egoraptor responds:

Well, I mean, you just told yourself why we didn't lipsync right there.