A good start
You clearly have some potential in flash. Despite the animation being on the rough side, everything was coherent and the animation ran smoothly. The tale was also simple yet entertaining nonetheless.
Reviews for "A Bird and a Burger"
PIED3 responds:
Thankyou, ill work on the animation for my next flash!
That honestly wasn't too bad...
It had better animation than I expected. Good job
PIED3 responds:
Glad it wasnt "too bad" ;)
nice!
this is a really great idea. the animation isnt the best iv'e seen but the concept really counts here.
PIED3 responds:
Glad you liked the story, ill work on the animation.
Finally.
Someone who knows to wait to submit movies until they shine! This was a very good first movie, if a bit rough around the edges (quite literally). You used classical music, which is an instant plus in that category, and the animation was rather good! Keep up the swell work.
PIED3 responds:
Thanks for the review and im glad you liked it!
Pretty good!
I made a cartoon like this once..
PIED3 responds:
Thanks!