Good
I like how your music fit well with your animation
Reviews for "A Bird and a Burger"
PIED3 responds:
Aye, the music is good.
Hmmmm.....
For someone who eats at Mcd's, he's in pretty good shape! I'll tell you the truth; the animation put me off (at first). Then I gave this flash a chance and it surprised me with the free-running/pakour action and the fitting music. In fact, the visuals became less a factor that of the overall entertainment value of the flash as a whole.
Nice flash!
PIED3 responds:
Well, he's in good shape cause he has to chase after his food! ;)
I like it!
I'll start off by saying that the title of this flash was awesome.
But that's not very helpful, is it? Plot itself worked fine, but if you're going to do a piece without dialogue, that's reliant on the action completely, you should definitely put emphasis on the characters. Have some fun with it. A lot of the time, particularly near the beginning, the main character's movements seemed a bit stiff and overly-tweened. This improved as the short went on, but it was still there.
But some of the movements could use some more observation. For example, watch a bird in flight. I've never seen them bob up and down while flying. Also, when the character gets up near the dumpster, take a little time and have some fun with it. The action seems to run into itself. Most people don't just push off and wind up on their feet. Maybe have him get to his knees first or something like that? Maybe he could grab his head for a moment and steady himself or wipe off the dirt? Something needs to be in there to make it seem more natural.
Finally, 12 frames per second isn't bad. It's the minimum for the human eye to perceive movement. Most animation (at least traditionally), is shot at 24 frames per second, but each frame is shot twice, so it essentially runs by at 12 FPS.
Anyway, good job! I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future.
PIED3 responds:
I see exactly what you mean about the animation, Ill and spend more time on it next time, and thankyou for the long and detailed review!
Wow...
That's just AMAZING! Well done on your first submission, I can see your going to be quite famous around here.
PIED3 responds:
A 10! Thankyou very much!
OMG, Hilarious!
The conept of the movie was really funny, I also loved the music, it was great, it followed your animation flawlessly. Lastly the movements of the characters were great, the only complaint I have is that the actual drawning were chopppy, they are not really smooth. Other than that I loved it, maybe invest in one of those computer drawing pads?
PIED3 responds:
Yes i might buy a tablet now i come to think of it, thanks for the advice!