Reviews for The Final Act

[mantis0702]

Hilarious story

I really love the pacing and "punch line" of this. As soon as it started i though. "Man...I hope this mime f****** dies." The rendering is pretty slick. I thought the animation was a bit lacking. I gave you a 7 because although the aesthetic is very polished, I think the main focus should be on the movement. Mimes really exaggerate their movements and I think you could add some more of that into the characters actions. It felt stiff sometimes. Did you model and rig the character yourself? If you did then thats a pretty impressive feat.

orb responds:

Yep everything about it was done by me except for the music.

[Korsik]

Story

Umm I work in 3d, I work on movies and television shows... The story was clever and original, it was well executed. Your modeling, texturing wasn't so great. Atleast you didn't have seams. I can tell your rig was simple but did the trick and your rendering, in Mental Ray I guess was better than everything else. Animation was good, you skipped a few frames and your camera flipping from the "box" and his expression kind of went fast and made your head do a 180. Over all for a student its great work, certainly better than my student work.

[Multihunter]

Good quality animating

But the whole thing wasn't really that good. It was really short, and didn't really say anything as to why the mime did this so it didn't go down well if you ask me.

[LaughingCat]

I'm not really reveiwing this, though it was good.

To the person whose reveiw is in front of me: What?

[fusionx963]

That was sad.