Great, very touching
This is a song that almost every one can relate to, it is a song of clarity and nirvana that puts you in a peaceful deep trance. I liked it and the piano was beyond belief. Keep it up.;)
Reviews for "When the First Leaf Falls RXD"
HouseMasta responds:
thank djdan for the piano, he really did an oustanding job, didnt he? thanks for the vote 5 and the 10!
WOW!
amazing, worthy of top of the new wave! this is by far my fave song of yours [sorry, i dont like vg mixes]
HouseMasta responds:
sorry that you dont like vg mixes
Almost
The idea is really great only try to get some more variations and more instruments. Its a little bit the same the most time. I like the drums :)
Check my stuff 2 pls and review/vote them ;)
HouseMasta responds:
thanks MoT for the review although i didnt completely please you..
This is SO close to being a killer track...
I haven't got very long, so i'm going to tell you the one thing that i feel would help: This is very clearly an FL Studio song, anyone that worked with the program should be able to recognize that. The issue is that you've put very little effort into masking that fact (Most of your time seems to have been spent in the writing: Compositionally this is an exelent song, worthy of publication, and for that i am in awe of you.). The main issues are in the FL Keys module and the FLS-standard drum loops you're using. For the keys, you could either use a Parametric Equalizer to tweak the sound so that it sounds better, or try to find a new synth for it (KVR is a site with a HUGE collection of synths, look it up). For the drumloops, it would be best to just find new loops (they're all over the place if you look), since you didn't actually write new beats (Beats are hard to do...). If you're unable to do so, try putting a slow-moving flanger on the drums (The Ultra Fat Chorus works REALLY well for this).
With a little bit of polishing, you could go places... seriously.
HouseMasta responds:
yea i needed to export this to Reason or something to get a fuller, more realistic sound. thanks for the 9 anyway!
P-E-R-F-E-C-T-O!
dawn, thats hot! this song is worthy of platinum!
HouseMasta responds:
T-H-A-N-K-Y-O-U