Irony in the "that was your family voting" when B Serious is the one with ankle biters putting in their assigned "support my track guys!!!!" votes. Come on, critique a little. Or you know, just say home if you're all bias.
V1 - good opening lines for a battle, very fun to listen to. those couple lines seemed a little rushed but the flows rolled smooth if a bit rough. hooks hit their mark. the fact it sounded like two different voices (not the intro) kind took from the mood. very few words seemed wasted though. good upbeat start to a battle sets a good pace for the battle. the voice mods in the opener were a bit overdone though. personal hits and boasts were clean, but the one run sounded like he was low on breath.
V2 - the more i listen to this verse the worse it seems. any time i see someone end a line with "____, G" or fucking ______ just to fill the tempo disappoints me. to say nothing of, yeah, rhyming "you" four times. could have done the same job with different lyrics no problem. then once again he ends with me/G/me just so he could force the same rhyme scheme. started off with a good hit with Hennessey but that was about it. should have kept to that mood. "kill your engineer" was a good bash. had the better annunciation by far.
V - 3 Wyze has some good flips but falls soft on my ears, partially cuz the volume takes the wind out of it, especially with what would otherwise be a decent close. nice to hear a change in time that doesn't come at the cost of four lines with the same ending though. I can't rag on that enough. "dunce" was kind of a 'meh' way to end a line but "real bee/dead after you sting once" was tempered steel.
V - 4 weak start. "copied style/respect" was too handfisted for any battle. anyone can pull that line and feel like they deserve easy points, didn't ring with anything that happened. this whole verse the mannerisms in his words made me think of the robot chicken line "you's a gay-boy bunny" and I'll put dollars to donuts that you hear it now too. drake jerk off line was hilarious though. the haymaker line belongs at the start of the verse rather than so late. the second use of a "your mom" joke in a battle was weak, especially when you try to run a big hit sampling the vancouver bite. could have taken the 5 minutes to chop it up a bit so it didn't sound like a basic copy/paste and made it sound like it actually belonged in the line's flow. would have taken two seconds to drop then end of "vancouver" at the very least to sound less like a square peg in a round hole. too bad the closing dead noise on the track ruined the ending of this.
In The End: I'm with Byron on the volume issues. Like critiquing good food with a bad stink in the air at the same time. Going with Wyze by far for this match.
B Serious wins for projecting his voice, annunciation, swagger and two, maybe three good hits. Missed on flips, relevance, your mom jokes and boring/forced line schemes.
Wyze gets points for drawing out B's slips, fun wordplay, nothing really felt forced and possibly the most tasteful (as you can get) WTC line I've heard in a long time. Loses on production values, projection compared to clarity and dominance (mostly all the same thing).
Basically I imagine B Serious would have more bounce on a stage, but Wyze is the only one who'd have enough substance to pull an album worth listening to. Point to Wyze.
