DUDE. This is your -first- attempt? Please tell me you're pulling my leg or something. This is incredibly good, way way past 'for a first attempt'. I love the melodies, the shifts and changes, and the catchy little tune throughout! And it's four minutes long to boot! There's way too many around here posting 1 minute craps and expecting heaps of praise. EXCELLENT work, overall!
Hope to see more trance from you in the future. :3