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Author,when you will stop doing your flashes in old "arcade" style?
Really man,this graphics kills me every time after some good flashes on NG .
I understand ,that you worked hard,but was your work worth for somethink than saying that it is not great? I would have done this better(if i could of course)
Wtf is "old" arcade style? As for you doing this better if you could, that is way better said than done.
Definite potential
My main issue though, is though I can tell you do spend effort and time on the action scenes (which are pretty darn nice for a sprite movie, I hope to see you improve on them even more with time); the dialogue scenes are a bit dated. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it, but for next time try and give the dialogue scenes a bit more life.
8/10
Maybe for the next episode?
I was thinking that if it had voices it would be better, maybe you could use some of the dialoge from DBZ episodes? as long as it sounded clean and consitant it could be good.
Probably, but there are lots of good sprite movies out that only use dialogue and they are still a hit (SMBZ and one of Short Factor's movies and Proxicide's movies). Thing is though my animation is not as swift and eye catchy, which is what I know I need to work on.
Mostly why I'm gonna try and improve before I start on the next episode.
not bad
this is not bad in fact it my have potential on a good series with a little work
oh if you don't mind an idea why don't you try having them find the black star dragon balls to try to tern him evil forever but like i said it's just an idea
I have no idea how turning him evil permanently would work out, or how to even put that into work. I already have a visual of how I'm going with how it's currently made and how its going to end.
I don't know what you ppl want from me to satisfy you, as you are saying this has potential. I know it isn't great, and the only real fault I see is my animation action which will be changed before I even attempt to start Episode 2. Other than that though I'm basically stumped, but will try to find the answer by watching other successes.
Not bad
I like the story, animation needs a little more work, but it gets the job done. Overall its entertaining.
Yes, and the whole reason I got into spriting was to basically make good fight scenes. So I'll def be trying to improve before making Ep 2