Well...
As you said, some parts work better than others.
What I thought you did really well on was the visuals. The backgrounds looked good, and you had put time into coloring and shading everything.
You need to work on your comedic timing though, not all of the bits were funny, and the randomness wasn't timed very well.
So try and work on that in your future submissions.
PS. Nipple twist was fun though!
Meh.
You tried, and so I give you a 3, but otherwise I think this needs much improvement. Not really much else to say. Regardless, keep trying.
i guess
i guess its okay or awesome
needs so much improvement
use a better framerate, record better sound, and leave those transitions out. the art was actually pretty decent. but it was way to slow paced. keep on trying!
great!
i could see the nipple twister part coming, but the face he made was epicly funny! this isnt the absolute best animation i have seen, but it looks good enough for a 10. keep up the good work!