Well...
I'm giving you a 10/10 because your animation and artwork was perfect, you did a great job. However, if we were going to grade you on everything else, it would be a 5/10 just due to the fact that it's too short and no sound. Make it a little longer, and put in some sound, and you got yourself a good flash going on.
Very good!
You are a very good animator, but, I am sensing you lack of patience though. Try to take your time, and hell, do excatly what you are doing now only do it until the animation reaches 5, 4, or 6 minutes! Good Job! :D
Short...
The animation and artwork are flawless, but the shortness of thos flash really pisses me off...it could be awesome if longer...
nothing bad animated in fact, but I notice that it is somewhat choppy, so next time do better!!!
Really good animation but could benefit from more time put in it was kinda choppy at times