You have great potential.
To begin with, make it longer. Great flashes usually aren't made in a day.
Otherwise, the graphics were cool, but you need music. Too many good flashes just don't have music.
Hope you make it into the portal, good sir. You certainly have the potential for it.
thanks man, i couldn't find any music fitting, but i'll make some next time. thanks for the review and constructive. :)
got to admit
that was kindof funny, too short, keep it coming, your good at comedy
you know what? thanks man, thanks.
Spend more time...
And we'll be less harsh. The animation was alright; could have been longer. The sounds did their job I suppose, but nothing really commendable.
well, i guess i shoulda put this in the author comments, but the kinda thing was that i had to do a short a day for 10 days, so the lapses in quality are probs due to that. thanks for the review tho