not baaad
I want more. if thats what your trying to accomplish:)
great work, i like the concept
Reviews for "Abnormality Episode -1-"
That looks painful.
Pretty good, compared to what most other flashes are like.................................
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Has promise
Nice movie guys, it looks like this series is going to be good. The plot is shrouded in mystery and weirdness, which I do enjoy, and (unless I missed something) the audience is left in the dark as to what is going on. Cool as, mysteries FTW.
The dialogue could use a little work, I found it cumbersome in places. The opening scene could have been shortened or made a little more interesting by introducing something else to the conversation. There was a lot of redundancy, and repetition of the drawing and the dream that I felt was unnecessary.
The mystery room scene felt unnatural, it's not clear why the guy picked up the test tube full of magical goodness or why they were in there in the first place (the guy thought it was really cool, but the "coolness" was never explained).
Overall, the drawing and animation was good, the plot has great promise, dialogue and pacing could be improved but I look forward to the next episode. Keep it up :D
I gotta say GOOD
Originality: 2.5/5
First I have to say, spoof off Heroes? Naw it's just another basic hero story becoming a hero by a gigantic explosion. 2/5
The story-line itself more original using teens and the cliff hanger at the end. 3/5
Graphics/Animation: 3.5/5
The graphics are well...
The drawings themselves are a sure 5/5. Along with the way he uses layering.
On the other hand you have some pretty sorry animations. The toons' could use more movement, especially when they talk. I know it's tedious but it would help. 2/5
Sound/Voice: 3/5
The sound was linked well so I give it a 4.
The voices, although in character, needed less slurs and mumbling. It needs to be more professional. It sounded too sloppy. 2/5
Plot: 4/5
Even though the introduction was slightly hard to follow, it did keep me going and into it.
Overall: 13/20 = 6.5/10
The video all in itself seems amateur. Though the drawings look professional.
-Bonus-
I would have rounded down except for the awesome accessibility features.
Final Score:
7/10 (4/5)
Interesting
The animation looks good. A little tweaking here and there and maybe it will look better.
More improvement on the voices and sound please. It kind of ruins the animation.
I'm thinking that this might actually work. =)