Confusion...
So... I liked this the first time you submitted it and I think I left a review saying such, but... Why exactly did you resubmit? For a couple of nicer special effects? I don't understand.
Reviews for "Abnormality Episode -1-"
studio-nightbird responds:
Nightbird Uses Confusion ray. Oh no Blessing is confused :3....Well There where a few things I wanted to add in but because our time ran out I couldn't. anyway thanks for the fare review ;)
awesome
only two complaints, artistry could be a lil better, and a slightly cliche back story, still awesome and interesting way to decide who got what powers. waiting for numero 2
Wow
It's beyond me on how this didn't pass the first time. You've got some real talent. I only have one complaint, the characters look very similar.
Great Job! (Tim and Eric FTW)
Very nice start!
I liked it a lot. A few suggestions: Work on the pacing. The opening was a little too slow-paced. It's okay to make it long, but the pauses in between characters talking needed shortened. Also, as someone said before, change up the characters a bit more. They look too similar.
Overall VERY well done, I can't wait to see more.
Dam dude
Very nice work there. It was lengthy and interesting to watch. Though just a few things, sometimes it was hard to tell who was who. Maybe introduce the characters a little more distinctively. And I thought, although the explosion was a kick ass piece of work, keep it all in flash. It felt inconstant with the rest of the piece. Other than the sounds were great, drawing and animation was beautifully done, and will only get better with the next installment.
Best of luck with the next one!