Hmm....
Alright, this was a good flash...serious flash that is. I liked the story, but a couple of things could use some work.
A. If you are going to do a "serious" flash such as this, you need some more voice talent, or an voice synth to alter your voice. The bad guy (the one in red) his voice needs to be...distorted more. You have the right pitch, but distortion is always good.
B. Work on your animation a little. For example, when the helicopter was flying over the ocean, it looked as though the helicopter was just a picture pasted on.
Very good storyline, but just needs some work. Otherwise, I expect this to be a good flash movie :D