hm...
To be quiete honest it was kindof... crappy.
im sorry dude but seriously most of this flash consisted of NO animation just some simple parts :S
most of the stuff shown were still images and normaly i wouldnt care but it looks as if its like done like a minute or so for each picture and not realy put in any effort....
as for the sound, its ok but its kindof bad...
allot of noise in there as for the singing
off key and off of tune sometimes...
im sorry but next time try the following :
singing lessons
better mic
put more effort in the images and animations
good luck with your next one dude