Notbad work here
Its not all the time that one comes across a flash submission like this one, its somewhat differant but has an exciting feel and touch here, As soon as this started it was something unique and differant ofcourse but thats more on the plus side of things. there is alot of Potential within this and I would love to see that excell to higher hights. This was kind of "ARTISTIC" with the artsy like colors and all, the animation was decent the one thing that could be better here would be maybe adding subtitles and making this film longer. I feel this could have been a little better you want to Grasp the audiance with some dazzling visuals, and some sparkly touces, Now you did present a good flash submission here, it was pretty entertaining but again could use some work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always a plus in this area, so try and work on some of the ideas and suggestions I have suggested, some of them would really help, while others might just be more think tank ideas. the one thing that could be better here would be maybe adding subtitles and making this film longer
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