It's not bad, a little surprised that it got daily 2nd. Drums have a nice beat to them, but I find the hi-hat is a bit too harsh on the ears. The main rhythm is alright, but overall I wouldn't say this is 8-bit.
I don't know what programs you're using but I would look up the rules on how to actually make it 8-bit. The one that I remember is that if you want it to be by the dot 8-bit there can't be more then ... 3 (?) sounds at any given time.
Pretty decent for 2am though : p