Sparkle
I liked the sparkle
Reviews for "Twix"
onefifth responds:
Heh, vocals are apparently the way to go.
funny
short, funny and up to the point(sorta). good job but after the twinkle part instead of just pain noises, u should have made the guy soy somthing funny and made him rant about stuff, and in the end u should have made him say, "can i have the twix bar now?" and the announcer guy should have said ".......no"
onefifth responds:
Thanks for the suggestions!
I'll keep that in mind.
nice work man
and doing it fbf, muchos respect for you brother!
5/5
10/10
onefifth responds:
Heh, thanks! Hard work paid off.
Almost perfect.
You almost had it man, you should have either cut it off right when the lil twinkle went off under the twix or you shoulda make the guy louder and said funnier stuff cause it kinda just dragged after the twinkle.
Otherwise great job!
onefifth responds:
Fair enough. Thanks for the feedback!
Short, Simple, and Funny
It's short, simple, and funny... what could be better?
onefifth responds:
^^ Thanks!