its ok
it was ok but for some reason i expected this to be about the books with corporal flynn. anywho the animation was ok a bit of work is needed but i think you knwo that already. you also need to work on your music transitions. u have the doom theme playign heavily and then silence. however as this is ur first flash most fo these mistalkes are to be expected and again as this is ur first flash id say you definatly have somehting to be proud of. you have a nice coupel of bits of humor such as the humming when he gets the keycard. anywho i hope this review helped and i hope the next oen is just as good.