The writing and style of delivery really sold this surreal piece. Haven't really heard you do this sort of thing before: very well done.
Reviews for "Nando's Girl"
haha - too awesome - - you should do another with johnny depp voices haha
Just beautiful sir! They tone and mood were perfect, and the imagery fantastic! If you and your friend were to create a full short story in this style, you might break the internet.
RicePirate responds:
it's amazing what a difference a real writer can make ... I should consider that for my future flashes lol
I almost thought Johnny Depp went gonzo and jacked your account! A perfect likeness of Thompson's writing style... I almost thought it was a direct quote!
Like a fine, forgotten Scotch, your range of style has improved and expanded -well done. Pretty damn clean read. All one take? I would try and do it all in one, cause I hate editing. Gotta own every word...
RicePirate responds:
mmmmmm scotch........