yeah
ok for one not bad for a scanning paper flash... i will hand it to you i wouldnt have the patience... second i just kind of gave up on reading the first part of it... way too many spelling errors... loved the music really was a good choice... but i really agree with the guy below me... needs better animation... maybe next time on computer would be a good idea... and you need alot more action... sorry man but it just sucked. Better luck next time
Smooth animation, but unoriginal theme
Your flash was ok. The animation was smooth, but lacking in variety. The theme's been done, and I agree with others when I say it's not that original. The song was nice. But you kinda gave away the whole thing with the intro.
a little rough
i think if u waited a little longer then u could havve make a better movie
Not that great
The drawings themselves were pretty good, but the animation was very lazy and it was obviously so. The song didn't really flow with the scenes/action, but some meaning could be taken and applied to this story. With a little bit of work you could've synced it with the music and it would've sounded a lot better.
Then there's the whole "brother" thing, I couldn't help but chuckle when I saw how wide his mouth opened whenever he tried to talk. The theme was cliche and the story either wasn't there or didn't make sense. This makes for a good rough draft. Try again.
could have been better
you have a really good premise for what might be a good story but the whole thing doesnt make sense. also the whole 2 people jumping in the air to fight eachother thing is a little hackneyed and you put it in there twice. i might suggest studying 2 different sword styles and pitting them up against eachother so that at least your action piece can outdo the somewhat weak storyline. i apoligize if this offends you but i think you have a good thing going here and i thought id put in my 2 cents on how to make it better.