hmmmm..
It was alright,..i can really see how u wanted to make it have a good ending,..and man just scaning from paper grats for the put togetter,..of course like all flashes theres improvements to be made in one way or another,...but as we know learn by them and better the next one,...once again Congrats,...Hell you made the front page..lol..Keep it up!!
Well....
i think its great and stuff but....
The music was kinda emo...
Personally i dont like those warrior chosen one thing... but you did a great job......
Just add some Slayer next time ^^
Daffy Duck or Daddy Fuck ?
Okaaaaaaaaaaaay. This is the kind of flashes which narrate a story in one episode, some succeed well, but this one fails at the purpose. It's scattered, implicit. I say it would have been more epic if this episode was the ending of a series. The story is a bit confused (and is taken a bit form Naruto innit) and the animation is sketchy, insipid, not emotional, therefor the characters are not. No voice, which is a significative minus when you want to tell a disheartening story. But overall it was worth the view.
Well Done
Very Well Done, you should improve on your art though and some clarification would be useful for the story line. I got the main idea of what you were going for though and it was good.
i appreciate the work put into it
but its really short and not really much of a fight just a couple flashes and bam its over