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Reviews for "The Last Fight"
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Oh... Its so sad... TT.TT
Certainly improving. Much to work on, though.
The amount of dedication that you show to your fans is commendable. I urge you to get a Wacom. It will be worth it. Even I was skeptical, but it's become more and more clear how useful it is.
One of the most challenging parts of a fight movie is clearly showing the action of the characters. This was a movie I expected a fight to be in. Strangely, while there was blood and swords and jumping sequences, I didn't see much combat. You seemed to focus on the story, which started out promisingly good, but ended up melting into an original plot composed of twisted cliches, like kidnapping and brotherly rivalry.
There was just a lot wrong with it, although the quality is much better, with better effects and much more drawn frames. In short, the paper-drawn thing you have going on is slowing you down TREMENDOUSLY, and it prevents you from doing more than music videos that try to tell a plot with an empty promise of action. In the future, I'd like to see you reach beyond the comfort zone of a music video and concentrate on plot and action.
I'd also like to point out that, although spelling is correct, you seem to have problems with context and capitalization. "Don't make a stupid thing" doesn't make as much sense as "Don't do this stupid thing." Adding foul language adds no emotional effect to sentences other than giving it a low-brow label. A line of the text that was supposed to be seen blinked too fast for me to read. It blinked so fast that it's message has been subliminally "written" to my brain, now. Advertisement companies are banned from doing this.
keepwalking responds:
many thanks for your review, its one of the most usefull Ive ever read. I would like to apologize myself for such an awfull spelling, you see, Im not from America, and english is not my first language, so its really hard to creat deep conversations between charachters. Second, yes, Im thinking of buying a Wacom, I think its a great investment.
My next work will go beyond my regular stuff, I promise, and hope to read your review again by that moment.
koool
it was awsome.but what did he do to the other guys brother?
awesome
i love it, very nice job drawing all of that. i know i could never do that.