excellently done!
while it is masterfully atmospheric, there are a few glaring flaws that get me when i watch it. i understand the pain and the sorrow of the scarecrow and the hard to see bird thing and blah blah blah blah blah you get enough compliments on that. i am here to bring things to a literal level!
okay, major flaw #1: inconsistency! sometimes the mouth things were torn, then they were repaired, and it fluctuated. that's confusing.
#2! no degradation! while the bird crap and the tear were always there, the tear would get gradually worse and the bird crap would eventually go away. also the mouth thingy. and! if snow is piling onto it and making it sag, it wouldn't go back to normal! it would keep sagging more and more! and while the full extent of the sagging is illustrated at the end, i dont get the feel that it's dying as much as it is trapped in an endless loop. so yeah, that would be sad if the bird crap and gun wound were highlights in your life. but i just dont think you captured the effect quite right. could use a little refining there!
anyway! it doesn't get a perfect score because there's room for improvement! but i still thought it was very good and all of that clarification stuff ima go play mario.