Here it is...
Here's what I think, I don't know where you are coming from in this, personal interest, to find the weak spot in people, or other things, but one thing you want to know when doing something like this is that when your expressing a fear or situation to people, it's through you. Your connection, your feeling's on a matter are mostly sub-conscious and the visuals are triggers to the fear. So while this may have stirred into your mind with the whole package, your only giving us a part of the feeling. Now don't get me wrong, doing that is no easy thing, I just wanted to let you know this. And another thing is that while your addressing your people through a visual media, mental reference is everything. Not that your creatures were not imaginative, but that they were so closely related to human figures and attributes, people can relate to that. People see people everyday, so it's not going to horrify someone as much, especially when your goal is to thrill with the unknown. Listen great job, grade A stuff, I just wanted to give my two cents. But I find your view interesting and, if you would be so kind to let me, I'd love to help in any future endeavors you might take on. My email is connorquinto@gmail.com