Great
If this is honostly your first flash, it is suprisingly good.
Not bad, keep it up.
hope to see more from you, young padawan....
Great
If this is honostly your first flash, it is suprisingly good.
Not bad, keep it up.
hope to see more from you, young padawan....
great job
for your first flash, very nice
amazing
that was amazing for a first flash, i couldn't get into the story but the animation was definetly high. do some differant videos like a parody of something and i will keep givinng you 10s
good job!
not bad if fact for a FIRST sprite flash movie! i look forward to seeing what else you got in the future.
LOLOLOLOLOLOZ YES
I enjoyed that very much, u definetly will be able to do some quality sprites in ur future. Im thinkin of doin sprites myself but the feeling keeps coming and going to do them.
It was good but a few touchups could make it better
1. Close ups (though u did experiment with them)
2. Text- make it come up faster and leave it for 5 seconds. I did like how u had a break between key words for the lulz
everything else is great though. Be careful not to get to video game oriented when it comes to the comedy (ex Mario Calamity, check it out for good humor)
Keep it up. Hope to c stuff from u :)