This must be your first
It wasn't bad. But the movements need work.
Reviews for "Red VS Blue - The battle"
lol
i like the end..................................
..............."wooops"
reminds me of dbz
lol i like it. Little flashes like this deserve a better score :)
Nice!
Well, it's all pretty much good, with the exception of a few things. For starters, you need to up your frame-rate, to about 30 (usually around 33 with fight scenes). It'll make your tweens look smoother.
Your frame-by-frame was nice, better than I could do, but you need more of it. Looks like you got lazy at the moment with the lazer.
You could also try and shade the backgrounds and characters, whilst perhaps using some gradients. It'd have been nice to see more details on those planets, and some close-ups on your characters.
When you don't know what else to draw on your backgrounds/characters, just spend a few extra minutes detailing them more.
Some of the views of the characters seemed out of porportion too, like in the first shot of the two, their torsos were rather wide.
Anyway, good luck with your Flash, hope you submit some awesome stuff!
- Josh
Good Job!
Not bad at all for a first submission. I would have given this an 8 or 9 if you added more sound effects and made it longer.