Wow
Your FBF skills are very impressive. It flowed well and it was very smooth. The only critique I can give is that when you do close-ups, you might want to tone down the line thickness. Other than that, amazing job, amazing story, amazing everything.
P.S. Sorry for the 9/10, I can't biased ;)
P.S.S. I did give you a 5/5 though.
With the closeups i got kinda lazy and rather than FBFing some of them (like i should've) i decided to tween in for it instead. After all, getting that kinda sequence right is a pain, and after 2 or 3 tries i accepted that i wasn't ready to do that yet, so i opted for a close-up the old fashioned way. Either way, i like how it turned out, and when i'm just looking at it without trying to pick things out it almost doesn't look like i made it, which to me it means that it turned out good. ^^
i dont get it
but it looked cool so 4/5 and 8/10
I don't get it either. I tried to make sense out of something that i dreamt of myself (which should make me worry, because if i can't make sense of my own mental pictures, something's amidst). Meh. It came out looking pretty awesome. Moar happy for me.
Pretty cool
The animations of sonic were spot on and the drawing of him was good aswell, however the people seemed to lack a bit. The effects of lighting and gradients were used very well. It was a good solid animation although the scenes changed a bit too fast and didn't feel well paced.
Good Job
This cartoon was pretty much drawn out right. I didn't want to change any of it since it would've ruined what i saw in the back of my head (as well as the bits and pieces i came up with in my dreams). I know it seems a bit scattery but there's not much i could do since i wanted it to look exactly like it did in my dream, or at least as close to it as possible. Hopefully i get a better idea soon, this was a lot more fun than anything i animated so far.
Awsome
I really liked the fbf animations and the style. It looked like you really took your time with this.
Nice Job! :)
Only reason i took my time with this is because i experimented a lot. Something i didn't do with past animations since i'm a lot more used to jumping into it with my usual happy-go-lucky attitude. On top of that, work and going out kicked in and ended up making me waste a couple of months before i ended up pulling the finger out and finishing what i started. It's now finished and i'm s happy i could cry.
Nicely done
Animations were nice and smooth. The art style was fitting and same with the music. The backgrounds were done well and the camera angles were a nice touch. Good luck with future animations.
I put two and two together... Listened to Onihime for the first time when i played it in Basic on a Drummania machine and i loved it so much i decided to download it. After listening to it for a couple of times while i had some peace and quiet i started getting the images you saw on that animation (well, close enough). It's a shame it didn't quite get the exposure i was hoping it'd get. Oh, well. I'll just make another one. ^^