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Reviews for "Windows RL - Untitled"

funny

The animation and graphics were poor, try not to use black backgrounds because they blend in with the newgrounds background and contrast too much with bright colours. Also, don't use gradients where they're not needed because it instantly makes any flash look like it was made by a 10 year old.It could have done with sound and some more colour.
Some of the jokes seemed a bit half arsed, as did the typos on everything eg 'splinternet explorer' and everything falling apart. Being interactive would have made it more interesting.
A few of the gags were funny, eg the stabbing the pong ball, but everything was sloppy. If you practised you could probably make something good.

lol

The paperclip part made me lol...

Quite funny

The animation and graphics were poor, try not to use black backgrounds because they blend in with the newgrounds background and contrast too much with bright colours. Also, don't use gradients where they're not needed because it instantly makes any flash look like it was made by a 10 year old.It could have done with sound and some more colour.
Some of the jokes seemed a bit half arsed, as did the typos on everything eg 'splinternet explorer' and everything falling apart. Being interactive would have made it more interesting.
A few of the gags were funny, eg the stabbing the pong ball, but everything was sloppy. If you practised you could probably make something good.

ritchielee666 responds:

Better Like This?

I Liked it!

Windows jokes always get me, probably cuz i love to make em. Call me biased but it's a solid 8.

Not bad..

But TAKE OUT THE SEIZURE THING AT THE START!

Also, why not make it a game?