I shall!
Cambo an Bug working together... touching dicks... it's really nice.
GOOD COLLAB, I ENJOY COLLABS THATS ARE GOOD.
Reviews for "TBA - Time Trial #1"
Psi43 responds:
bug&cambo yaoi
Interesting and humorous.
The art and voices in all three were good, especially in the 2nd part. It's nice to see something made out of a cliche that is almost as old as time itself.
good
like it =) the girl rocks ,,l,,(^.^),,l,,
New time trial?
I was surprised to hear something about a time trial. This has got to be the first time in like three years I've seen one of these! All in all, it was a good collab, though I do wish it was longer.
Nice work
And here once again I find one of those interesting and yet still entertaining flash entries, a good submission you have here, I was delighted with all the happenings and so-on. Nice work here great characters nice voice overs, and nice story here with some good animation, really good stuff here. Im not sure I saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks. It was pretty good and I look forward to much more of your work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this some what better. Some "STATIC" on the voices just a little you may want to clear that up some how.
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