Not bad...
Not bad at all, I've even smiled a few times. The music at the BIOS just crashed me out, plot seems to be allright'a... The only thing I dislike is graphics - I know not everybody is a super-drawer (you draw better than me, pal), but you could spend a bit more time on graphics (like that desert-wyrm or background at BIOS). Compare the first & the last submissions of Krinkels.
So, take your time and keep doing what you do, you are on the right way ;)
Mad Meat
7/10,
3/5.