im honored
headtaker, big pall, you even improved more! whit sound off the guns and the rest, awesome! i enjoyed by life:D im honored but indeed, this movie is so dam great it deserves more!
music: 10/10 big action sound, i like it. even better shot and explosions sound!
animation: 10/10 EVEN better improvement on explosions and animation overall.
movie itself: 10/10 man i rlly enjoyed it, absolutely cant wait until the 5th episode!
Not bad...
Yea it was ok. I am sure later on you will improve. Next time try to make sure you dont make any spelling or grammar errors and instead of having text bubbles try having message boxs at the bottom of the screen. Like Super mario Bros Z. Also sometimes zooming in can make parts look better.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next one.
GETTING BETTER
That's all I have to say ha keep up the good work!
OK, but lots of areas to improve in
It was ok, but there's lots of areas to improve in. For one the whole one screen above the other was just confusing. Were we seeing two different areas at the same time, or was one under the other or what? The intro text stayed on the screen too long and should have had a skip button. Also the characters have a habit of moving very quickly from place to place on the screen without it looking like they're walking. You could do with slowing those kind of animations down a bit. Finally the whole thing was rather short, and because the music didn't stop at the end anybody replaying it would get a second song playing over the top of the first one.
I know this seems to be a rather negative review, but I'm just trying to suggest some areas to focus on if you want to improve.
looked ok
This flash has terrible pacing and there's not much else I can say about it other than the fact that it doesn't look very well made (you only used sprites for one).