sounds
get some sounds like buy a mic.
and u can get cool sounds from flashkit.com
but i liket it for a firsanimation
Reviews for "First ever animation"
Pretty good!
Great for a first animation, I'd say. I just laughed and watched how smooth the animation was. You're on a good way, just keep the good work up :)
Cool
It would be much better whit sounds.. but its okay..
Well...
The animation is average. My first advice is to put a "play" button at the start and a "replay" button at the end. Most people don't like when an animation starts immediately after loading.
There are some points in the animation that you could polish a little. Also, try to put some sound, it really makes the whole thing more interesting and fun.
Overall you made a nice Flash, you just need to fix some noticeable errors. ^^
It was good
it was good, but the flashing colours maybe epileptic.
Meh good job, you get a 4!