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Reviews for "There She Is!! final step"

Disappointing.

The animation was impressive, short but really nice, you finally added some dialog, and some new features to the animation, that was outstanding, but the simplicity of the ending was very disappointing, I was expecting something epic from you, like your other works, but this it's just not exactly how the series should have ended. There is She has transformed into an Icon for animation, and the first step had show how powerful does flash animation media could be, the future right now it's not exactly different, but now flash it's a web in which it has combined itself to the popular culture. What I try to say is that you created something very important, so I was expecting something much better from you, mister SamBakZa, for a series so epic as this one.

Storyline

Altho your animation skills are good your storyline wasnt fresh
i suggest adding more original ideas instead of the same ideas used in numerous anime shows before this, as well as further back, Shakspeare did it!

Your creation was unique only in the way it was a music video of the story, which isnt the best thing ever, i reccomend using voices and more elaborate sounds to increase story production and progression.

Im saying, add more depth into it, make it your own, be more creative, and good luck, you have the skill to do so

I love this

Dull and Uninteresting

The animation is smooth, if bland. However, the story is more bland than the animation.