Writing a critique....
After watching this I'm going to be honest... I laughed. Not out loud but more like a chuckle which is what i got from all this really. Other than that that's all it was worth really. The animation was above average portal quality (usually front page stuff is around that quality), it wasn't choppy or poorly drawn (your style could have been better but the cartoony feel would be lost). One thing that a lot of people overlook is that you timed this with the music quite well which I think only added to your comedy.
I'm actually surprised you took this risk around this time of the year. The uber Christians like to lurk around this time of year and you're kinda pulling off a big one here. However I found it funny really, it's a parody people come on! If everyone knew to take a joke I think the world would be a better place. But that's another story...
All in all you did a decent job, comedy was good, animation was good, all in all I guess all I could say was that this was a "good" submission and that's around a 7 in my book.