Good movie, needs better sound.
Thanks man, good movie this one, even with the simple drawings :)
One critique though: You need a better mic I think as the voice is very scratchy.
keep up!
Reviews for "Hitman's job part 0"
sam-delitans responds:
yea, you bet. thanks
Keep it up! (with minor changes)
It's "Dynasty" all over again, but this time with a funny one-man-one-voice Jackie Chan type of over-dub! They all sound like the "American" businessman villain in kung-fu films. But I did like your businessman voice. If others could do it in films, why not you, in an animation? You could have tried changing your voice between characters, though, keeping the same dramatic tone and then making the story roll a bit faster. It felt kinda like a soap opera episode.
Keep up the good work! I'm sure the next installment will be even better!
sam-delitans responds:
the next installment WILL be better. i already tried changing voices between charactors but they still sound the same and i have edited them quite a lot of times. thats why i put subtitles so you wont be lost half way through the movie.
nice plot, but work on a few points
1. geometry of objects, some of them just jaggers out, esp the text.
2. voice, you have a very heavy asian accent, and Engrish haha no offence.
3. movement animation, work on that, look at other stickfigure animations for ideas.
lookingforwarrd to see the next one
sam-delitans responds:
1. the text... yea when i first saw it, i was like ''shit the black bar is out of place.
2. because i make my voice sound like asian and english, some with deep voice, some with not so deep voice.
3. yea will do.
Okay...
Well, I wouldn't say its awesome OR great, it's okay...
I mean, the animation wasn't smooth, boring a bit,
bad-designed and the voice acting wasn't good, and the
sounds itself was bad.
Overall this is good.
sam-delitans responds:
i cant get the right sounds, i have so little sounds and other sounds just sucks. but yea, i still think i should get more sounds. the movie maybe boring if you dont know what going on, the animation shows the bad guy side and good guy side and shows how the bad force the good to kill. expect action in part 2