well its good
its put together well but i saw no comedy in the flash. the story was to jumpy also you jumped from mario dazing off to him busting through a wall. was it supposed to be a dream. one thing i liked was how u brought in sonic to get the gem. i mean i see how you put in authors notes the random scene part well i think i explained it or maybe you were talking about another
good job and good luck on future flashes